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Oh, you better be good, child. Good as gold.


The girl ran down the alley, her bare feet getting cut and stabbed by glass and sharp rocks. She needed to get away. Get away from what she had seen. What had been done. She gave a cry of joy as she neared the exit, but it quickly turned into a shout of horror as she stumbled and fell. The giggling behind her grew louder.


As good as good can be.


She scrambled back onto her feet and took off towards the exit. She ran as fast as her scratched and bleeding legs could carry her. The giggling grew closer. Then stopped.


Else you be grabbed by the Devil's child,


The girl let out a shriek of fear as her only exit was suddenly blocked. She took as step back as the person, no, demon, let out another psychotic giggle of sheer joy. The thing appeared to be a boy in his late teens. With long, curly, black hair tied back in a low pony tail and piercing eyes of gold. Its pale, ivory skin was flawless except for the three beauty marks that were perfectly aligned under it's left eye.
The girl stared at him, eyes wide in fear. "W-What are you?" She asked, her voice trembling in fear. He stopped laughing. He reached out a gloved hand towards her face, as if to caress it. The girl quickly moved back to get away from it. The demon shot her a pained look. Before the girl could question it, something wrapped itself around her ankle and dragged her back into the dark abyss of the alley.


And carried away from me.


The girl's screams were drowned out by mad giggling.

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A little story I had thought up yesterday. I wasn't quite sure how I was going to write it, but I like the way it turned out. The song was inspired by the Vampirate Shanty, I just edited a few lines. I might use this in part of the story I'm working on. Probably as a dream. Anyway, I hope you like it! (~^o^)~
Seoul Steel Chapter One: [link]
Seoul Steel Chapter Two: [link]
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~candyexorcist Aug 23, 2012  Student General Artist
It's deliciously scary and tingly. :3
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~phoenix509 Aug 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Really?! I'm glad you think so! It's actually a dream in a story I'm writing. ^o^
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~candyexorcist Aug 23, 2012  Student General Artist
Really! Tell me more about this story.
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~phoenix509 Aug 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Eh. Well, I don't even know much about it yet. A girl wins a free trip to South Korea, and finds herself surrounded by the SMPA as soon as she gets off the airplane. She runs, gets, caught, manages to escape, and ends up trying to figure out what's going on while avoiding getting caught by the police.
There's going to be more to it then that, but first, I have to write a little more to get there xDD
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~candyexorcist Aug 23, 2012  Student General Artist
It sounds promising so far!
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~phoenix509 Aug 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Haha. Thanks :iconbiggrinplz:
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